احتاج مساعده لخبيرة اللغه الانجليزية ضروري

اخواتي اختي محتاجه برزنتيشن غدا بإذن الله واتمنى لكم تساعدوني بأسرع وقت

هي بالجامعة وبالدورة التأهيليه وانا حاولت اساعدها بهالموضوع بس ابغى ارائكم

وهل الكلمات والجمل صحيحه وهل ممكن تكملوا الموضوع ؟

How To Be Successful

everybody want to be successful in his life , school and job .
we dream about being successful in every thing .
what a challenge is this !
most of people believe that they cant achieve great successful because they don’t have want it takes or because they are not educated enough . they complain that luck is never goes on their side .
you know what ? you don’t need luck you just need faith , faith that you will be successful .
there is a lot of things that anybody can do to become a success in any field they choose .
to become a successful person you always have to say :
– i’m a successful person
– i can attain any success level i desire
and remember , don’t use any negative form in your sentences .
so pick up your pen and start climbing the road of successful

عطوني رأيكم تكفووووووووووووووووووووووون مالي غير الله ثم انتم

انلحس مخي موقادره اكمل الموضوع ولا كذا يكفي ؟ اخاف يكون قصير